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Gulches
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 11:31, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
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UberSoldat93 
(talk) 09:16, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 03:03, July 7, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn (Talk) 12:58, July 7, 2020 (UTC)- Zed42 (talk) 07:13, July 19, 2020 (UTC)
Object
OOM
"Hazram Namir […] was present there for some time during the Imperial Era." The "there" should be more specific. Does it refer to the Gulches or Crucival?Last sentence could be worded better. "When spotting a TIE fighter" doesn't really work, might I suggest "When he spotted a TIE fighter"?Additionally, "He had seen none of those in the Gulches" doesn't correlate to the single TIE mentioned previously, nor the article's quote.- - - OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 12:11, June 30, 2020 (UTC)The bts says the Gulch was only mentioned in the novel, but the Appearances section has a {{1st}} template.- - - OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 12:12, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
- All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 12:22, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
Context for the Malkhanis clan and the Galactic Empire should be provided.Is the transmitter tower the transmitter tower on Crucival, or is it simply a transmitter tower? Some context should be given in either cases.- - - OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 14:07, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 19:26, June 30, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
Does the book actually use the term "Imperial Era"? If not, you'll have to change that to something like "time of the Galactic Empire," which would also allow you to link Galactic Empire directly.Zed42 (talk) 19:06, July 10, 2020 (UTC)- Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:28, July 10, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:13, July 19, 2020 (UTC)