Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gruuvan Shaal Kebab

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Gruuvan Shaal Kebab

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:25, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Dentface (talk) 23:33, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Immi Thrax (talk) 21:38, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:24, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:23, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 08:17, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Dent

• Shouldn't "found on" in the infobox also include Takodana?
  • Yup.
• The first paragraph doesn't have any referencing. Since this is a smaller article that doesn't have an intro, shouldn't the paragraph be referenced?
  • Typo, fixed.
• Does the cookbook explicitly reference Takodana as a planet? If not, you'll need to find a separate source for that. Dentface (talk) 20:49, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I could have sworn it did since it mentions it like 20 times, but apparently not, fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:08, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• Now the infobox only lists Takodana and not Batuu. Is that intentional? Does the book only mention it showing up on Takodana? Dentface (talk) 21:35, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, that is intentional. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:20, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Remember my objection here? UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • growls at Shay Looking into it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:49, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Please forgive my growling :P Added item citation since it's a craftable item that isn't found in a quest. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:14, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Immi Thrax

• It's strange seeing a food article that doesn't pipelink foodstuff anywhere... Perhaps meats? Immi Thrax (talk) 13:33, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure.
• There should be a physical description in the infobox and in the article body. Immi Thrax (talk) 13:33, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Is that any better, or did you have something in mind?
    • Works for me personally, but as a review note, Spooky has pointed out we could include color(s) seen in the picture. Think about it! :)
• Some details of the anecdote in the cookbook aren't quite accurately reflected in the article. The article comes off like Maz specifically banned kebabs for their sticks and nothing else, rather than banning all utensils (even spoons!) for their potential as weapons. The full anecdote isn't needed since it gets away from the kebabs, just clarifying that it wasn't kebab-stick-specific. Immi Thrax (talk) 13:33, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:13, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Does the source say that the kebab was banned? From what I can see, it's just that utensils were banned, which meant the kebab here could not be served OOM 224 16:07, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • You're right, how's that? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:59, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Finished reviewing via Discord OOM 224 08:17, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:17, 28 August 2021 (UTC)