Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Griph's uncle

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  • 1 Griph's uncle
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Braha
        • 1.1.2.2 CC-8
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Griph's uncle

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS 21:23, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Lil throwback to my nom of Griph himself. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:25, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
  2. Corellian PremierRogue SquadronMTFBWY 15:05, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:44, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:57, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:16, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • I believe the introductory sentence would be better structured like "The uncle of X was a…" (per here).
  • Some context for why Griph was interrupted would be beneficial. Moreover, you could summarise that Boba and his accomplices captured the Twi'lek. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:06, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 04:12, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The last sentence has no connection to the article subject, so I think it can go. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:33, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Removed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 02:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:16, 6 January 2022 (UTC)