Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Griggen Sylo

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Griggen Sylo

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 04:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Nominated Paxi Sylo a few years back. Might as well knock out the parents as well.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:11, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:18, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:47, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 22:18, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 15:47, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

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Ayrehead02
  • Good to see you back on the CAnoms page Fred! The databank backup link on both the parents and the child isn't working and since it's automated by the template I'm not sure how to fix it. To save you time here is the correct html. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • This is how you fix the template. (The date is from the correct URL Ayre found.) Imperators II(Talk) 16:32, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
  • Dantooine needs context. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • Probably worth specifying that the farm he lived on was large and in the outback. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Could you add that the Empire was established in 19 BBY. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • .The BTS should also mention that the databank entry originated in 2004. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done.
    • That should be everything. Thanks for the review! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 03:12, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • "In the year 31 BBY, the youngest of the Sylo children, Paxi, was born.[2]" - referencing in this sentence should be rearranged: the fact that Paxi was the youngest child should be attributed to a specific source, not the reference note for the date.
  • Ref 2 needs some more work - the Databank entry doesn't say the battle of Dantooine happened in 22 BBY.
  • You should not only mention the release date of the entry but that it's the old version of Databank, as well. Imperators II(Talk) 16:32, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • I believe we handled everything on IRC. Let me know if there's something I'm missing. Thanks for the review! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 03:12, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

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