Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Greybush

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Greybush

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:52, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 01:40, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 314 words (0 introduction, 89 body, 225 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG, WP:SWG

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:20, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 17:52, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:50, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
4. NotBoop (talk) 07:02, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
5. Lewisr (talk) 19:27, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
6. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:12, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Seems like healing/harming are effects listable in the infobox.
• BtS: "They were first identified in..." and for the sentence after this—using 'they' reads as if Greybush was a person, perhaps swap to 'the bush was...' or similar.
• (Review note) Small note to not double-link years. <3 —spookywilloww^talk 20:02, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Will look out for the years! AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:37, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• Does the game explicitly capitalize the word Greybush? Otherwise it falls under the Non-sentient species section on capitalization in the MoS
  • It always capitalizes the name.
• Having a bit of trouble following the logic about why we take Rubina's version as canon over the others
  • I tried to reword some parts.
• Is there a bit more context that would explain what exactly the Prologue is? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:28, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • I tried adding some context. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:18, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
    • That's much clearer, but we definitely have to accept the final product as the more canonical version of events, even though the prologue is more direct in its sequence of events. So the description of Rubina asking the player to infiltrate one of the clans should be in the body, without confirming which of the clans were selected, and the parts in the 100% completion section that are based on the prologue should only be described in the BTS Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:13, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
      • Tried changing the wording and moving things around AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:00, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
        • Nearly there, the 100% section of the body still needs to discuss Greybush, maybe by adding on the end "which resulted in the spacer gathering Greybush
          • Addressed, AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:52, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
• Last sentence of the prologue section should be in present tense for consistency
• Is it accurate to source the prologue content to the same quest as the final product?
• The BTS says the bush was first identified in two different sources
• There's a double up in your referencing. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:53, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed all besides last objection. I'm slightly confused. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:52, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Apparently I was just making that one up Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:10, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
• The last sentence of the first BTS section doesn't work as a full sentence Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:10, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:35, 26 April 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please remove the sectioning from the bts. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:30, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:07, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
• Even in the bts you should use {{SWGcite}} instead of {{Tl|SWG}}. (These both apply to the other SWG noms as well if you haven't implemented them yet.) JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:38, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 03:29, 30 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:12, 2 May 2023 (UTC)