Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gorph/Legends

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Gorph

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:20, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:EWOKS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

Object

UberSoldat

• Article body is under 165 words. Per Rule 12 on the nomination page, the sectioning must be removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:33, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Please implement "notoc=1" in the Top template.
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Duplicate links.
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• BTS is missing episode air date.
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
    • This cannot be sourced straight to the episode. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:59, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
      • OK fixed AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:04, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
        • What I'm saying is you cannot use the episode itself to say it aired on that date, you need to reference that information to another source. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:12, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
          • Oh ok done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:14, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Missing {{1st}}.
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• No space for the body image. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:39, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

biggestleo

• As I understand, we no longer use 'None' in the infobox. Not my idea but I guess that's the preferred style these days.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:55, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• First paragraph isn't referenced.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• You're putting the period inside the quotations in the bts but not in the body.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Is 'scelera' a misspelling of 'sclera'?
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• I am not familiar with the usage of 'bored' to describe hair, could you clarify this?
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• You can link to Foodstuff/Legends, Amphibian/Legends, Homeworld/Legends, Cave/Legends, Sexes/Legends and Color/Legends in the body.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• 'the pit' isn't capitalized in the Gorph article but it is in its own article, which one is it?
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:48, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• The third ref note doesn't tell the reader exactly why the events take place in 3.5 ABY (the note is trying to justify 3 ABY)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:49, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• please check out Wookieepedia:Manual of Style#Formatting in regards to pipelinking.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:54, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Formatting for the third ref is hard to follow, can you clean it up a bit? Just use other refs that explain dates as a reference, thanks~ Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 14:41, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:54, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Can you clarify if Gorphs' grotto is a cave or just cave-like? I have not watched the episode myself so use your best judgement.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:28, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Can you clarify if Gorphs were sapient or sentient? Or both? Cumulonimbus Cloud ^(Talk) 15:24, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:28, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• You can get a higher quality infobox image from Disney+.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:43, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• The article is currently lacking in a lot of detail about the search for the princess. The Gorphs are the main villain in the episode, so I wouldn't be surprised if this goes over the word count once you sufficiently expand it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:29, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:06, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• I would recommend wording the Bts similar to another Ewoks status article such as Garth. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:39, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:47, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Cwedin

• The article body is now over 165 words, so it should be sectioned.
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:06, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• You should check Supernatural Encounters: The Trial and Transformation of Arhul Hextrophon to see if there's any info worth including in the BTS.
  • Completed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:03, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
• The current date ref needs to be changed; Leland's post is referring to Star Wars: Behind the Magic, which only mentions the Ewok films and not the TV series. - Cwedin^(talk) 19:31, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Done AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:36, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
    • I should've clarified: 3 ABY was accurate, but the citation wasn't. See the reference on thunder bat as an example. - Cwedin^(talk) 20:25, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Ok, fixed! AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:53, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• With the addition of Supernatural Encounters: The Trial and Transformation of Arhul Hextrophon in the BTS section, the word count goes over 250 words so I would like for someone from the EduCorps to close this nomination. I will try to complete your recommended edits and then nominate it as a good article. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:08, 22 April 2021 (UTC)