Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gillypod

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Gillypod

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:44, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Samonic 17:49, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:00, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:55, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 23:31, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• "The plant one torus-shaped leaf near the top pf its red stem, with pink flowers in the middle of the leaf.[1]" This is missing words :P
• Color can be linked through "red."
• The "electromagnetic swept" should have an – (ndash), not a - (hyphen) Samonic 07:56, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:33, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
• "ruins of ancient structures created by the ancient Zeffo species." Unnecessary to establish the Zeffo species as ancient when you say their structures are ancient earlier in the same sentence.
• "The plant had one torus-shaped leaf near the top of its red stem, with pink flowers in the middle of each leaf.[1]" There are many stems and leaves, so: "The plant had several torus-shaped leaves decorated with pink flowers on the top of each of its red stems'" Samonic 16:56, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:11, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
• How would you feel about moving the secret mission to rebuild the Jedi Order part to the beginning of that paragraph? Something like this: "In 14 BBY,[3] during the Mantis crew's mission to rebuild the Jedi Order, Jedi Padawan Cal Kestis collected many seeds, including a Gillypod seed. He collected and planted them in a terrarium owned by his companion Greez Dritus in order to repay him for his assistance." Samonic 20:10, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:51, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
• What was Dritus' assistance? Samonic 09:55, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
  • He pilots the Mantis for the crew. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:01, 31 July 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please introduce and contextualize the Mantis before discussing its crew. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:51, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:07, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• I will get a higher quality image later today. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:44, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:33, 29 July 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:32, 8 August 2022 (UTC)