Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Geonosian wars

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Geonosian wars

Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:57, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
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All handled via Discord, with some large updates and rewrites. I'm not reviewing any more articles today, and I don't expect Erebus to touch this article ever again :P OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:17, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:57, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
Now this is the Game of Thrones Star Wars ripoff I want to see. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:28, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:21, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 12:27, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

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CC-8

What's the wording used to describe the wars? To me the word Geonosian is enough to assume that it was a war amongst that species, but the fact that you've avoided it makes me think the title should be something less epic sounding like "Wars on Geonosis" or even "Geonosis wars" might work. But I don't have the source. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:07, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- How does that look? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:25, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
  - Hive needs to be linked, and "several wars" should be moved earlier in that sentence. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:38, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
    - Linked and moved. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:44, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
~~Giving a date for the Separatist Crisis might be useful.~~ Also Separatist is infobox exclusive, ~~but as it is I'm not totally sure that mentioning the Separatist Crisis in the Next field is really useful, since we know there's obviously other conflicts taking place in that time.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:01, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- After a conversation via Discord, there is no reason to remove the mention of the Crisis in Next since it's not something unrelated to this given what the book says. The other conflicts that took place in between are unrelated to this. I've added the date, though. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 17:02, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
  - Fair enough, Separatist still needs to be linked in the body. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:27, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
    - Is that fine right there?
      - No that's really clunky, try something else but I don't have any better ideas. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:33, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
        Not really sure where I can fit it in. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:10, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
~~Should specify that the crisis began in 24 BBY, not that it was just in that year.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:27, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:55, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
~~We have Sonic weapon in Legends, is there enough detail for a canon article to link here?~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:22, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
- Created. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:49, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

OOM

~~Just checking if you're okay with this copy-edit~~
Needs to be updated with info from Complete Locations OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:11, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

~~Inconsistency between the body and infobox regarding timeframe, please reword.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:47, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
- Is that what you had in mind? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:14, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
  - Now the "hundred years" part is infobox-exclusive. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:17, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
    - There. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 12:18, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:51, 11 June 2021 (UTC)