Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gan Basso

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Gan Basso

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 15:53, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The Codex Project

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:14, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 08:08, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:47, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
4. Winterz (talk) 22:48, April 14, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. 501st
   • Death date should be in the body of the article.
     • It's not exactly his date of death, but I made it more clear in the article.
   • Alphabetize categories. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:30, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 15:31, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
2. Winterz
   • "Among his discoveries was Ord Mantell (...) though he met his death in the Datar system" You need to tweak this sentence as it sounds as if his death was consequence of Ord Mantell's discovery.
     • Done.
   • "Daredevil" is not a very neutral assessment, if he was regarded as so, you should probably put it that way.
     • That's the exact word from the OOU source.
   • Could you please expand the Bts a bit? And don't worry about its size. Winterz (talk) 12:42, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
     • There's really nothing more to say. Cade Calrayn 22:58, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

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