Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/GWC-04

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Contents

  • 1 GWC-04
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fan26
        • 1.1.2.2 QGJ
        • 1.1.2.3 Anil
        • 1.1.2.4 Imp-04
      • 1.1.3 Comments

GWC-04

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:30, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Expected this to be much longer based on the last time I wrote a similar article, but this droid handled its failure very passively.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 02:52, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
  2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:56, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 21:32, November 25, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 15:22, November 29, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:19, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Fan26
  • "an attack by Wookiee colonists led by Chewbacca and advised by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn, who wished to drive the Federation off Alaris Prime." Could this be reworded, so it sounds less like it's QGJ using Wookiee's to fulfill a goal to drive away the Federation? Fan26 (Talk) 17:34, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
    • Better? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:10, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
QGJ
  • The quote mentions DRN-38 instead of GWC-04. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 21:13, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
    • Don't get lazy, kids. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:10, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
Anil
  • Have you checked Star Wars: Galactic Battlegrounds: Prima's Official Strategy Guide for a possible mention?
    • Yup, none of the leader names in the campaign are mentioned, even indirectly.
  • I am not familiar with the game, but the "troop center" should perhaps be pipelinked to Barracks/Legends.
    • Done
  • Since it's a battle droid, you should add that it's also a fourth-degree droid to the infobox. No need to add it to the article body itself per precedent.
    • Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:30, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • Does the game explicitly state that this event occurs between 39 BBY and 36 BBY, or does it only say something like "set 4–7 years before Episode I." If it's the latter, you may need an additional source for the timeframe. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:10, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
    • Oops, my bad. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:19, November 23, 2018 (UTC)
Imp-04
  • Please take a look at this to see the precedent emerging in how to format manual reference notes for things like droid class. Imperators II(Talk) 13:13, November 29, 2018 (UTC)
    • Thanks. Changed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:30, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Comments