Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Funeral of Hego Damask II

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Funeral of Hego Damask II

• Nominated by: — Samonic 10:41, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Back to Darth Plagueis briefly; Mention below.
• WookieeProject (optional): Novels

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Support

1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:12, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 01:47, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Date of Damask's death can go in the body
  • Introduced.— Samonic 08:38, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
• The bit about the hastily prepared obituaries is extremely relevant and needs to be in the article Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:03, 6 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Added.— Samonic 08:38, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
• I don't believe a youmay is necessary here Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:23, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed.
• Based on that passage I don't think its accurate to say that the Banking Clan was responsible for the obituaries
  • Fixed.
• Needs to mention that the election overshadowed the funeral and that the obituaries obscured Damask's role in history Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:29, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Done.— Samonic 07:52, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

Luca

• "who was the Magister of the InterGalactic Banking Clan shortly after the Muun's death," this sounds like Plagueis became the Magister of the Banking Clan after his own death.
  • Oops, he was the Magister of Damask Holdings, changed and fixed.
• You call Plagueis a "Muun" without previously specifying that he was one.
  • Addressed.
• I'd mention that he died on Coruscant. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:35, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Included. Thank you. — Samonic 16:36, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
• The infobox is missing some parameters: it should be copied from the template's page.
  • Parameters added; unable to fill them as no data provided.
• I don't know how the book puts it, but if the two events are concurrent, I'd say that Galactic Republic Chancery election, 32 BBY can go in the infobox in the "conc" field. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:11, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • They are not concurrent.— Samonic 07:46, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• I'm aware that Legends tends to be better for dating a lot of things (from what I've seen at least), but can you confirm whether the novel actually gives the 32 BBY dating? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:12, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
  • It does.— Samonic 11:55, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Sick, thanks for letting me know. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 01:47, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Darth Plagueis establishes when a series of chapters take place. (64 BBY-32 BBY the entire book; divided in approx. 3 parts) — Samonic 07:08, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• I don't think this is actually notable enough to warrant an article of its own. As far as I can see, there is no information about the funeral itself other than the fact that it took place. Here, "stories that might otherwise have been viewed as significant" is referring to Damask's death, not the funeral. OOM 224 11:58, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• "With so much attention being focused on the election, stories that might otherwise have been viewed as significant escaped notice. One such story was the unexpected death of reclusive Muun financier Hego Damask. Hastily prepared obituaries contained the few facts about his life that were public knowledge but scarcely touched on the behind-the-scenes role he had played in shaping the history of the Republic. Members of the InterGalactic Banking Clan were refusing to release any information about the funeral or about the disposition of Damask’s substantial holdings on Muunilinst and dozens of other worlds. Off the record, beings remarked that the intricacies of the Muun’s business concerns might take decades to unravel." — Samonic 10:41, 3 May 2022 (UTC)