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Freedom's Dawn
- Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:33, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
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JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:26, 28 April 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 05:27, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- — Samonic
19:58, 28 April 2022 (UTC) - Actually considered nominating this a while ago but never did anything with it. Glad to see it get to status VergenceScatter (talk) 06:10, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 14:30, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
Object
Samonic
Context for Jakku should be provided at the first mention of the subject.- The first mention of Jakku is where the context is provided, as the one before that is the battle. Should I rewrite the paragraph differently? --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:41, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- "In 5 ABY,[2] the Freedom's Dawn participated in the Battle of Jakku,[1] the final battle of the war, fought between the New Republic and the Galactic Empire's forces.[3]" I mean, it should be: "Battle of Jakku, the final batttle of the war fought between the New Republic and the Galactic Empire('s forces (unecessary, imo)) at the Western Reaches planet of Jakku…" — Samonic 15:14, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- Okay done, though I rewrote it a bit differently. Let me know if this works --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:52, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- "In 5 ABY,[2] the Freedom's Dawn participated in the Battle of Jakku,[1] the final battle of the war, fought between the New Republic and the Galactic Empire's forces.[3]" I mean, it should be: "Battle of Jakku, the final batttle of the war fought between the New Republic and the Galactic Empire('s forces (unecessary, imo)) at the Western Reaches planet of Jakku…" — Samonic
- The first mention of Jakku is where the context is provided, as the one before that is the battle. Should I rewrite the paragraph differently? --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:41, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
Could we assume that as this ship was an MC80 Liberty Type Heavy Star Cruiser, it had the same hyperdrive, systems and everything as a model of the series?— Samonic 08:02, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- Not unless we see it. Although this doesn't apply to length, the length of MC80 cruisers are all variable though they fall within an average. Still, I'd prefer not to add length to avoid assuming. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:41, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the info.— Samonic 15:15, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the info.— Samonic
- Not unless we see it. Although this doesn't apply to length, the length of MC80 cruisers are all variable though they fall within an average. Still, I'd prefer not to add length to avoid assuming. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:41, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Would like to see the date ref converted into a note mentioning this subject's destruction.UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:35, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
- Like so? --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:06, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:04, 5 May 2022 (UTC)