Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Four-thirty-ninth bomber wing

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Four-thirty-ninth bomber wing

• Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 00:42, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

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Support

1. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 19:48, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
2. Nice job! —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 05:15, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
3. The more we get away from "X thing was an X." The better. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:47, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:13, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Inconsistency in the capitalisation of "Four-thirty-ninth," "Wing Commander"
  • Should be consistent now
    • Wing Commander is still inconsistent OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 12:59, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Someone else changed it back to Wing Commander, it should be fixed now. The codex entry uses wing commander.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:45, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
• Some context on which group/who gave the military briefing before the Meridian Complex attack would be beneficial OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:11, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:22, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• In the infobox, the rank of Wing Commander should be capitalized since it's preceding and attached to a name. —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 00:15, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
  • It's not capitalised in the source so it should just be "wing commander" OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 04:47, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
    • That's proper English punctuation though: This is Wing Commander Galena Rans, the wing commander is here etc. Titles and ranks are always fully capitalized when it's preceding and attached to a name. —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 04:59, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
      • I suppose so. The source just says "Rans's service as a bomber wing commander," so yeah, you're right, it should be capitalised. However, I think this just means Rans was a commander of a bomber wing, not necessarily a wing commander, so that should be reflected in the article. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 05:04, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
        • Thank you for your understanding and I agree with that as well. —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 05:14, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:33, 6 July 2021 (UTC)