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Forward aid station

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 15:52, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 17:39, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:53, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:11, April 21, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 00:27, April 21, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Since there's no other article competing for the same name, there's no need for the parenthetical descriptor. Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the heads up, it is now moved. TK-462 (talk) 20:28, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • You need to bold the subject's name in the article body. Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Appearances item and ref 3 need to avoid the usage of the parenthesis. Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • The date needs a separate, manual ref note. Imperators II(Talk) 16:01, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • I believe the new reference should correct the issue.
  • Bullet points in infobox only go to the second bullet point in depth. Imperators II(Talk) 16:02, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Provide author and publication year in BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 16:02, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 20:28, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
      • It should only be just the publication year for novels. And it can be referenced to the novel itself. Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Something has gone really wrong with the lead sentence referencing, since you're sourcing info on a 2008 planet to a 2003 book. Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Weird brain fart, I guess. TK-462 (talk) 03:10, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • Are you trying to source the fact that Christophsis was located in the Outer Rim there? Imperators II(Talk) 10:44, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • Nope, I screwed that up. I believe it has been fixed now. TK-462 (talk) 14:43, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
        • If you're trying to source the fact that Christophsis was located in the Outer Rim to the SWE entry, then only the words "Outer Rim" (or "Outer Rim planet" if the novelization doesn't identify Christophsis as such) must be referenced to that. "Located on" should stay referenced to the novelization. Imperators II(Talk) 15:07, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
          • I've updated it, does that work? TK-462 (talk) 15:54, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
            • No. I've changed the referencing to what I was I trying to tell you. Imperators II(Talk) 17:39, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Context for "Star Wars: The Clone Wars" is needed in BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • I believe that should resolve the issue. I'm not 100% clear on this, so please let me know. TK-462 (talk) 03:10, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • I have a way to rewrite that part in mind, but say - does the novelization by any chance provide the film's release year? Imperators II(Talk) 10:44, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
        • Yes, it provides the date in novel. TK-462 (talk) 14:43, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • There's a redundant link to the Battle of Christophsis in the article. I recommend going to Your Preferences and checking "Highlight duplicate links in articles" under "Gadgets". Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • There's a couple more applicable categories: Category:Christophsis locations and Category:Outer Rim Territories structures. Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • Chaleydonia and Christophsis both need context.
    • Fixed, added that they were the capital and an Outer Rim planet, respectively. TK-462 (talk) 20:26, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • The first sentence needs to be referenced to the novelization.
    • First sentence is reworked so that it is fully referenced to the novelization. TK-462 (talk) 20:26, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Galactic Republic's name should be mentioned in full.
  • The details about the supplies in the quote can be added to the body.
  • Note: Be careful of small issues with formatting and linking. Additionally, the Notes and references section should contain the {{Reflist}} template rather than a manual reference list. I've fixed these issues for you here, but remember to do so yourself in future. I recommend using the source editor rather than VisualEditor when creating and editing pages. Zed42 (talk) 21:25, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've updated my preferences, thank you for the help. TK-462 (talk) 20:26, April 19, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:27, April 21, 2020 (UTC)