Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Forr

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Forr

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:23, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yes they look pretty same, because it is the same small amount of info. And no, there are no spoken lines about him in the novel.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. --Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ECvote—Axinal Convocation Chamber 13:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Do: a deer. A female deer. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:55, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:57, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  • Same objections again. I'll go through them all again once those objections have been taken care of.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 22:31, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
  • I don't see that the last sentence of the BTS is necessary. You could simply say he was "briefly mentioned" in the first sentence. Otherwise, nice work.—Axinal Convocation Chamber 21:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
    • That was part of my attempt to let the article look a little bit more different. Adressed and thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:14, November 12, 2011 (UTC)
    • Yes, of course. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
  1. Jang
    • Reload your infobox
    • If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
    • "However, Forr was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___
    • Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Forr, not "Forr" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting. JangFett (Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

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