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Fondo
- Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 21:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: For WP:FFGames
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- Immi Thrax (talk) 09:15, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
- Let our status articles take flight :P
Erebus Chronus (talk)14:29, 8 April 2021 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 04:38, 9 April 2021 (UTC) 
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:48, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
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Imp
You should note that Fondo shared his equipment and mannerisms with the other thugs.Maybe it's just me, but I think that noting that Kulda was also a Rodian is somewhat more important than saying she was female.- Please describe in the body where can the players encounter Kulda and her thugs. Imperators II(Talk) 20:53, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
- First two are addressed. The third is a little complicated, because Kulda and the thugs compete with the players in a Granee Noopa event. This section is so highly influenced by the way that the game is played that I excluded it from the article itself. However, if you believe that it should be added I can add a sentence about the event. VergenceScatter (talk) 02:48, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, so I've taken a look at the specific section of the book myself, and yes, it's basically biographical info that is relevant to Fondo. Also, there's enough info that it won't be a single sentence, either. Fondo is automatically present at the foyer where the introductions between the three groups are made, and is then among the guests that endure the toasting process. And in the BTS you should note that, should Fondo survive both the toasting and the Dance, his still being around for the Dinner affects the number of massiffs that are deployed against the guests. Oh, and that sidebar mentioning how during the toasts the actions of characters not directly affecting the PCs should be described cinematically is also something I believe should be noted in the BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 10:46, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? VergenceScatter (talk) 15:51, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
- Context for Nal Hutta and Sherin needed. You're still missing the part about the introductions in the foyer as well as the toasting bit. Also, not all of the drinks were poisoned. Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
- Should all be handled. VergenceScatter (talk) 03:02, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
- 186 words in the body, let's see sectioning and an introduction. Imperators II(Talk) 08:22, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
- Done, but it's a little long now. VergenceScatter (talk) 02:40, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- 186 words in the body, let's see sectioning and an introduction. Imperators II(Talk) 08:22, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
- Should all be handled. VergenceScatter (talk) 03:02, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
- Context for Nal Hutta and Sherin needed. You're still missing the part about the introductions in the foyer as well as the toasting bit. Also, not all of the drinks were poisoned. Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? VergenceScatter (talk) 15:51, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
- Okay, so I've taken a look at the specific section of the book myself, and yes, it's basically biographical info that is relevant to Fondo. Also, there's enough info that it won't be a single sentence, either. Fondo is automatically present at the foyer where the introductions between the three groups are made, and is then among the guests that endure the toasting process. And in the BTS you should note that, should Fondo survive both the toasting and the Dance, his still being around for the Dinner affects the number of massiffs that are deployed against the guests. Oh, and that sidebar mentioning how during the toasts the actions of characters not directly affecting the PCs should be described cinematically is also something I believe should be noted in the BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 10:46, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
- First two are addressed. The third is a little complicated, because Kulda and the thugs compete with the players in a Granee Noopa event. This section is so highly influenced by the way that the game is played that I excluded it from the article itself. However, if you believe that it should be added I can add a sentence about the event. VergenceScatter (talk) 02:48, 16 April 2021 (UTC)