Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Floog

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Floog

• Nominated by: NBDani (talk) 02:48, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Iffy on the BTS. I've seen precedents in BT-823 and CT-720 but I'm of the opinion that the BTS should be chronological.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:20, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic 16:52, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Just note the dash change here; you can take a look at WP:DASH if you're still confused. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:30, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:37, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• If the fuel refinery is conjectural, the conjectural name should not be used in the infobox. Instead, another name like "a fuel refinery" must be used.
• "he thought Floog would be helpful.[2]" Helpful for what?
• "Colossus station" What type of station? Train station? Space station? Please specify.
• Did Flix visit the fuel refinery by 34 ABY? I assume so, if I am correct, that should be specified too. Samonic 09:36, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
• Please correct the following discrepancy: By 34 ABY in body; In 34 ABY in reference.
  • Fixed. NBDani (talk) 13:54, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
    • There's still an error within the article. Additionally, I've looked at other Resistance articles, and it seems like IN 34 ABY is correct, while BY 34 ABY is not. Samonic 16:24, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
      • Sorry I think there's some confusion. We don't know the date of Floog's retirement. It happened by 34 ABY because that's when we learned about it. Flix visited IN 34. NBDani (talk) 17:05, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
        • I think you will need two different date notes, then. Samonic 07:33, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
• The date note (second one) does not say that Floog had retired and given control of the refinery to Flanx, please source that part to the episode. Samonic 13:37, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Added the missing ref. NBDani (talk) 13:54, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
• "visited Drahgor III" Shouldn't this be "the fuel refinery" or "the refinery"?
• Introduce a paragraph break.
• Can we get some variety when identifying Floog? "the individual; the uncle" Samonic 16:43, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
• You need to say that the Drahgor III station was a fuel refinery when you first mention it. Samonic 11:46, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done NBDani (talk) 12:46, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• I think there's enough of a precedent (Nacronis, Unidentified human (Carajam) and other noms from that comic) to say that the preview is worth noting in the BtS after the overview you've done of the episode. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adjusted. NBDani (talk) 00:38, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:38, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

• The Gozzo species reference note was here when I picked this article up. I'm kind of iffy on it as the DB seems present case and there's implication he's off world. Would appreciate feedback on that. NBDani (talk) 02:58, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
  • What is this implication? Samonic 09:36, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
    • The quote at top of the article. Nothing says he's still on Drahgor and nothing says he's left. But I take their conversation to mean he left.NBDani (talk) 10:50, 28 July 2022 (UTC)