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Fish stick
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:30, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Do you like putting fish sticks in your mouth?
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 08:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
501st dogma(talk) 18:12, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:13, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
My statement below stands. Cade Calrayn 01:19, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Code-8
I don't know if its policy but its generally preferred if links are avoided in quotes. Same goes for the other nom- Removed and added to body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:37, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Context for Lill.Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 12:07, July 5, 2014 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:37, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Lee's charge
Era needs to be mentioned in the body.Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:37, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
Again. Reload your infobox. Please do this for all of your current and future nominations.- Reloaded but I'm not sure what its changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Capitalization in the eras template.- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Does the source actually say what fish sticks are, or is this just a real-world description?- Described per source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Look at your quotation. Most of these errors I'm finding are simple ones that you've been told about many times and should know better by now, and the people who reviewed this previously should have caught.This applies to everyone: The CAN is not a fast way to push little articles to status; it should be treated with the same respect that the GAN and FAN processes are, and your articles should be of the same quality as your GAN/FANs. CadeCalrayn 15:52, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Context for lill. CadeCalrayn 16:53, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
SE
Per your Lill nom, we don't know if Lill is a spice or not. Please change it here as well.- Oops forgot it was in there. Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
The quote says that they were baked in choya, not choya bread. Do we know whether they are two separate things?Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:50, July 31, 2014 (UTC)- I suppose they could be different, but I assumed it was just a shortening of Choya bread since its in the same source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
- For all we know, it could be two separate things. Probably best to simply say choya. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:26, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Will that need a separate article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:18, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Don't know why I asked. Made and done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:30, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- Will that need a separate article? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:18, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
- For all we know, it could be two separate things. Probably best to simply say choya. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:26, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
- I suppose they could be different, but I assumed it was just a shortening of Choya bread since its in the same source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
Again, you refer to Dalkash ale as a food here. Please fix this on all applicable nominations. If an objection is left on one article, please fix it on all applicable nominations, rather than having the same error objected to over and over.Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:19, August 7, 2014 (UTC)- Sorry, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
You have it in the seafood category, but seafood is not mentioned anywhere in the article.Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:52, August 7, 2014 (UTC)- I added that because it contains fish. Should I remove it? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
- If it is seafood, it needs to be mentioned somewhere in the body. In addition, you mention fish in the infobox but it isn't mentioned anywhere in the body. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:07, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
- Added. Fish is mentioned along with the other ingredients in the third line. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:43, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
- If it is seafood, it needs to be mentioned somewhere in the body. In addition, you mention fish in the infobox but it isn't mentioned anywhere in the body. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:07, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
- I added that because it contains fish. Should I remove it? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
Nothing in the article body establishes that the article subject existed during the Rebellion era.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 04:59, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:04, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
If the source gives any information on the primary species living on Lianna, you should add this information to the article. As it is Liann cuisine, the primary species would eat it.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 20:41, August 18, 2014 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:30, August 25, 2014 (UTC)