Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/First Pius Dea Crusade

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First Pius Dea Crusade

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 03:44, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: One of almost 30 crusades that are indirectly mentioned in Warfare. I need to fill out all the Pius Dea crusade redlinks for the Seventh Alsakan Conflict's GANom anyway, so I might as well do these.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 07:52, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
2. Winterz 19:53, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:49, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Your going to need to create an article for the Ord Yndar redlink.
     • Done.
   • Context on the Ootmian Pabol.
     • Done.
   • You need to mention everything in the infobox inside of the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:28, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done.
       • You still haven't mentioned the second crusade.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:17, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
       • Done. Cade Calrayn 00:23, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
   • You need to add a Behind the Scenes section and you should probably also get someone to check how it is mentioned in Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Praji.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 15:22, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
   • You're now over two hundred words so you will need to section the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:20, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
     • There. Less than 200 words, but I combined some sentences for smoother flow. Cade Calrayn 03:33, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

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