Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fideltin Rusk's first squad

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Fideltin Rusk's first squad

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:43, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero. A superfluous article creation because of this was narrowly avoided thanks to the IRC.

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 08:08, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  2. — DigiFluid(Whine here) 19:34, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Winterz (talk) 15:48, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 13:53, March 9, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 00:30, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ECvote—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 02:51, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. There's whining to be done here.
    • First sentence is very weird, could you tweak it a bit? Because as it is, it would look a lot better if it was separated into two small sentences. The connector "and" just doesn't fit in.
      • Done.
    • It would be great if you could write there its latter mention (the quote's) between the two fellows.
      • Done.
    • Also, what became of Durant would be great. (emdashes is a hint) Winterz (talk) 20:09, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
      • I'm going to have to pull the extraneous context card here, as it's not relevant to the squad itself. I'd understand if I just called him Durant, but his later fate isn't relevant to the squad's history or its members. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:41, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
  2. There's no mention of the Galactic Republic in the entire article, including the affiliation section of the infobox. I suggest you remedy that. 501st dogma(talk) 22:57, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 04:18, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
      • Its not in the affiliation section. 501st dogma(talk) 21:23, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
        • I don't see the need for it in the affiliation section, as it's already evident in the Republic Military; I've left it out on articles before, and the IRC peanut gallery says that it's not necessary. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:07, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
          • Leave it then. 501st dogma(talk) 13:53, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

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