Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fideltin Rusk's father (second nomination)

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Fideltin Rusk's father

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:56, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Beginning the process of restoring all those stripped status articles from my absence. >_<
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. LucaRoR (Talk) 19:18, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:32, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. Dentface (talk) 19:26, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor Holocomm 23:34, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. —spookywillowwtalk 23:54, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

LucaRoR
  • Are you sure that Star Wars: The Old Republic Encyclopedia isn't a source on which he's mentioned? If not, you should probably change many references. LucaRoR (Talk) 17:04, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • He's not specifically mentioned, but the Chagrian colony from the other sources is, and it's the first time that colony is established to be on Mindor. The Encyclopedia also is the source for the "Chagrians = pacifism" stuff. I did shift the citation for the wife though. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:32, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Is there really a need for different date refs for infobox/body?
  • I think you'll need a note for ref 2, since you're sourcing his death location directly to the encyclopedia despite him not being mentioned there. Maybe something like, "[source] places his death on a planet that the TOR Encyclopedia identifies as Mindor."
  • Not seeing a need for the second bts sentence; if there actually is, like some of your past noms have had, it should be made clearer, because right now it just seems to be repeating info from the appearances section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:19, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:24, 18 August 2021 (UTC)