Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Felinx

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Felinx

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:25, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 15:19, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:43, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
3. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:29, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
4. Zed42 (talk) 20:17, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
5. TK-462 (talk) 18:49, May 10, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• "When Everi Chalis, the governor of the planet Haidoral Prime, thought that too many felinxes in the planets capital city, Haidoral Administrative Center One, were turning feral, making it look bad." This sentence needs to be cleaned up.
• In the BtS, Legends should be formatted as Star Wars Legends, not Legends. Fan26 (Talk) 22:16, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:25, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

TK

• "A felinx was an animal that could be kept as a pet during the Imperial Era." This sounds a bit odd, almost like Felinx's could only be kept as pets during this era. Maybe if you could broaden it to be something like it was a pet that was known to be kept as a pet during the Imperial Era.
  • I edited it a bit, as the way the sentence was structured in a way that made it seem like the Galactic Civil War actually owned the Felinx. Nice work otherwise! :) TK-462 (talk) 14:13, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
• It looks like Felix should be capitalized every time it is mentioned.<
• "In 3 ABY, after the Rebel Alliance's Sixty-First Mobile Infantry attacked Haidoral Prime, Corbo joined the company. Additionally, Chalis defected to the Sixty-First." Could you rework this to flow a bit better?
• "Corbo attempted to visit her over his dead Felinx, carrying a gallery knife with him." This could be reworded to make it clear that he wanted revenge for the dead Felinx, not that he was hovering omnipotently over it. Maybe I'm the only one who read it that way, but it stood out to me. TK-462 (talk) 01:29, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • All addressed. For the last one I've more specified that he was trying to confront her. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:18, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Article body is at 165 words, meaning it requires sectioning. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:37, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Now at 163. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 14:27, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• Please go with the capitalization provided by the source.
• Does the novel explicitly say/heavily suggest that the felinx were non-sentient? Because we know there are semi-sentient creatures that could be kept as a pet, such as the Kowakian monkey-lizard.
• I believe Category:Pets is for individual creatures only. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:20, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:42, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• The page is listed in Category:Felines, but the article body does not reflect this. Is this indicated by the source, or should the category be removed? Zed42 (talk) 22:25, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Changed it to Category:Creatures of unspecified biology. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 06:56, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:28, May 14, 2020 (UTC)