Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Featherfern

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Featherfern

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:30, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

I love ferns. Samonic 15:25, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

1. I love ferns. Nice work with Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order. Samonic 16:48, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:45, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
3. Featherferntree gully... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:52, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:17, 10 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

Kiljifern

• Missing link to gender. Samonic 17:30, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Added link. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:45, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
• Native could link to homeworld.
• I get Bogano is located in the Outer Rim Territories? If so, can you reword it so it doesn't seem like Featherfern could be found in the Outer Rim? "The Featherfern was a plant native to the grassy Outer Rim Territories planet Bogano"
• "The plant grew on the various mesas of the planet and had purple flowers.[1]" — Could you change it to something like this? "The plant grew on several of the planet's mesas and had purple flowers." Samonic 15:25, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:50, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Can you include the Fractured Plain in the second sentence?
      • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:00, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
• "the terrarium" should be "a terrarium." Samonic 10:56, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:00, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Infobox image should fill out infobox width per Layout Guide. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:30, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:23, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• This article is almost identical to Kalpi and needs to be rewritten (First sentence and some of the gameplay wording are identical). Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:53, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
• You can also note that it had a single stalk with larger leaves at the base. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:53, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
  • And the single stalk :)
    • • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:47, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
        • Just check you're ok with this. "Upwards the plant" wasn't sitting right. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:56, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
• Sentience is infobox-exclusive (can you also note this on Kalpi) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:53, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:14, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
• Have a look over again as there's some glaring grammar issues, possibly missing words? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:56, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:47, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
• Can we put this in Category:Ferns and/or Category:Flowers? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:56, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
  • The plant itself isn't a flower so it wouldn't fit in the Flowers category. Although the game does not necessarily refer to the plant as a fern, the name contains the word fern, so I would like to hear your opinion on adding the fern category. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:31, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes i think it can be Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:41, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:17, 10 July 2022 (UTC)