Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Father Ocean

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Father Ocean

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:57, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 01:05, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:36, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
3. I respect that this article's hovering just at 164 words, always fun word games.—spookywilloww^talk 18:51, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
   • Not anymore but thankfully it's still below the world limit ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:45, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
4. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:45, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Herasoars^(comms) 02:52, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
6. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:51, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• There's no room for that second image. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:55, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:30, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Braha

• Devit is a disambig link.
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:13, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
• "The city-state of Doxeti on Doxet bordered Father Ocean's coastal waters, while Dorynn, Devit, and Lazeria City on Laz and Tormaine on Torm did so as well." the latter four appear to be "major cities" rather than "city-states" according to their articles. Can you give some clarification in the sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 02:43, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:13, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
• I'm not digging the proportion size of the intro to the description. Can the intro touch on the flora/fauna as well as mentioning that it surrounded some continents? The other description info I'm not as fussed about regarding the intro. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:43, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't see most of that information as "essential" for the subject as the intro would usually include. Father Ocean is more of a concept than a tangible thing compared to its component oceans. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:45, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Ok yeah I kinda agree with that now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:51, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:51, 15 January 2023 (UTC)