Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fame Drimal

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Fame Drimal

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:22, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Poor Neimie Bastards, Part 2

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 07:22, June 7, 2014 (UTC)
2. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:39, June 7, 2014 (UTC)
3. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:32, June 7, 2014 (UTC)
4. Always good to see movie characters nom'd Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:56, June 9, 2014 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:16, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object

SE

• Mind rewording the first sentence a bit? Maybe something like "Fame Drimal was a male green-skinned Neimoidian who served as a lieutenant in the Confederacy of Independent Systems during the Clone Wars against the Galactic Republic."Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:41, June 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:01, June 18, 2014 (UTC)
• In the second sentence, you have a comma after Expansion Region, followed by a capital In. Is this supposed to be the start of a new sentence? Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:01, June 19, 2014 (UTC)
  • Corrected. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:18, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

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