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FN-1971
- Nominated by: UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:26, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
Fan26 (Talk) 16:36, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 08:02, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:46, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 13:12, March 6, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Zed
I feel like the part where Finn is initially mentioned should either be reworded or use his former designation, since he wouldn't have been called that at the time.Zed42 (talk) 07:36, March 5, 2020 (UTC)- Removed the word "named". UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:41, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
- "Named" would probably work fine as long as you clarified that it wasn't his name at that point. Something along the lines of "a young stormtrooper later named Finn." Zed42 (talk) 07:50, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
- Revised. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:56, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
- "Named" would probably work fine as long as you clarified that it wasn't his name at that point. Something along the lines of "a young stormtrooper later named Finn." Zed42 (talk) 07:50, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
- Removed the word "named". UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:41, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
Category:Humans is currently redundant, as it includes Category:First Order stormtroopers.Zed42 (talk) 07:50, March 5, 2020 (UTC)- Removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:56, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:12, March 6, 2020 (UTC)