Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Esooma

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Esooma

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 14:17, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The planet...

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:09, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, July 4, 2017 (UTC)
3. Cevan (talk) 21:25, July 13, 2017 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:24, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
5. MasterFred^(Whatever) 08:37, August 18, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II

• The whole first sentence is referenced to the Online Companion, including the fact that Esooma was a planet.
  • Meant to cite that to WbC when writing the article. Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:51, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
• You should specify Esoomians were sentient.
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:51, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
• Is the date 7 ABY explicitly mentioned in Wanted by Cracken, or is that just extrapolated from Cracken's "in the three years since the Battle of Endor" introduction? If it's the latter, it should be properly referenced.
  • All we know is that Wanted by Cracken takes place 3 years ABE and that Esooma is no longer quarantined by that point in time. Is there a better way to write this in the article, or is it good as is? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:51, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
    • The wording itself is fine, but it needs proper referencing, i.e., a ref note explaining to the reader WbC is set in 3 ABE and how that is equivalent to 7 ABY. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:57, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
      • Added the note. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:04, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
        • Cool. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:09, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
• In the BTS, you should either go with a) just the publication year for both mentioned sources, b) full dates for both sources, or c) the full date for Wanted by Cracken and just the year for the Atlas. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:31, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
  • Turns out the Cargo Bay had the full release date; added an "archivedate" as the backup was broken. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:51, June 25, 2017 (UTC)
    • Nice! Imperators II^(Talk) 19:57, June 25, 2017 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

• I feel you could included a little more info based on the quote, specifying that the Esoomians couldn't leave under the quarantine and were free to find work offworld after. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:04, June 28, 2017 (UTC)
  • Added, along with a little extra from GG10. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:16, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• The body uses exactly the same wording as the quote. Can you please vary a bit? 1358 ^(Talk) 22:02, August 12, 2017 (UTC)
  • Changed up the wording. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:31, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

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