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Enrivi system
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:10, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
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- UberSoldat93
(talk) 18:11, May 28, 2020 (UTC) 
Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 23:01, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 02:45, May 31, 2020 (UTC)- QuiGonJinn (Talk) 07:25, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
- Zed42 (talk) 20:59, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
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Zed
"After leaving the Enrivi system, they discovered that the rebel company had been tracked there through a hypermatter trail being left by the Thunderstrike's damaged hyperdrive." Is 'there' in this sentence referring to the Enrivi system itself? If the Empire tracked them to this system, that should be mentioned before the battle itself.Zed42 (talk) 03:07, June 1, 2020 (UTC)- Rearranged. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 07:34, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
I'm confused as to whom the word "they" refers in the last sentence. It can't be the Imperial forces mentioned in the previous sentence, since you've already established that they were all killed.QuiGonJinn(Talk) 13:37, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
- Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 13:45, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:59, June 4, 2020 (UTC)