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Emperor's Disciple

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:42, November 20, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:45, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 12:08, November 28, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:06, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  • How do we know that his death occurred in 4 ABY? The Battle of Endor doesn't necessarily mark the start of 4 ABY, so 8 months after could easily be into 3 ABY. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, November 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • New Republic needs to be linked somewhere in the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, November 18, 2018 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Please fill in the navy and crew parameters of the infobox. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 11:50, November 18, 2018 (UTC)
    • Who's Who doesn't state that the 37,000 were the crew, it only says that many people were killed on the ship when it was destroyed. Filled the Navy one and linked it in the body. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:18, November 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • I was under the impression Grand Admiral was capitalised. Please check the source. "the grand admiral acted on his emotions".
    • Definitely lower case in the source.
  • You can probably add Flagship to role in the infobox. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:41, November 21, 2018 (UTC)
Anil
  • If the source indeed states that this is Il-raz's flagship, which is the case according to the article's BTS, Flagship/Legends should to be linked somewhere in the article. Category:Flagships should also be added.
    • Done
  • The word ship should be pipelinked to Starship/Legends in the BTS.
    • Done.
  • following his appointment to the admiralty Are we talking about the rank of Grand Admiral here? If we are, I think something like following his appointment to the rank would be clearer for readers.
    • Done. I mainly just wanted to use the word admiralty.
  • Il-Raz or Il-raz? You use them both in the article. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:33, November 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • The article currently has two different references to date the Battle of Endor in 4 ABY. A single one would be better. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:42, November 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • I don't think we have a name for the in-universe version of The Essential Chronology. If this is the case, the name shouldn't be used in the article. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:48, November 19, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators' Disciple
  • If you look at p. xiii of The Essential Chronology, it clearly says: "[...] this draft of The Essential Chronology [...]" Imperators II(Talk) 17:38, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • So it does.
  • The in-universe equivalent of The New Essential Chronology was composed by 36 ABY and is a Galactic Alliance document, not a New Republic one. Imperators II(Talk) 17:38, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • Ended up changing the quote to the original chronology
  • The sources do not say the ship was destroyed, only that 37,000 people were killed. Imperators II(Talk) 17:38, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • Wow, major assumption on my part.
  • The sources do not capitalize the bombardment of Shalam. Imperators II(Talk) 17:38, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • "Grand Admiral" should probably always be capitalized, per the exception clause in Wookieepedia:Manual_of_Style#Ranks_and_titles. Imperators II(Talk) 11:04, November 28, 2018 (UTC)
  • Since you're naming the Who's Who article's authors in BTS, you should do the same for The Essential Chronology, especially given there's just two of them. Imperators II(Talk) 11:04, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

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