Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Electroharpoon

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Electroharpoon

• Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 22:56, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 22:20, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 112 words (0 introduction, 79 body, 33 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 104 words (0 introduction, 71 body, 33 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:Novels

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 02:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 21:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 22:19, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Does Category:Electrical weaponry suit? Seems like most of the electro- prefix stuff seems to have it.—spookywilloww^talk 00:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Seems like it does, added the category CometSmudge (talk) 00:42, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• I think it'd be better to slightly tweak to introduce Haze's mother as her mother and a historian at the start, otherwise the historian being her mother comes slightly out of nowhere when you mention her parents first and then specifically mention her mother Lewisr (talk) 04:31, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Tweaked, does this work? CometSmudge (talk) 20:22, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:19, 30 December 2024 (UTC)