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Electrocrop
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:52, June 27, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Some surprisingly consistent errors from the novelizations here.
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
Tommy Macaroni 16:35, June 29, 2018 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:29, July 1, 2018 (UTC)
Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 13:19, July 7, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 17:46, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Tömmŷ
In ref three you say TLJ is in 34 ABY, but in the body's you say it only takes place around that time. Surely it takes place in or after 34 ABY?TommyMacaroni 06:19, June 28, 2018 (UTC)
- Oops, I must have used my outdated TLJ date ref. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:28, June 29, 2018 (UTC)
Electrocode
Could a quote about the animal cruelty on Canto Bight be used, or is that too much of a stretch?- Probably a bit too general. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:17, July 1, 2018 (UTC)
If Finn and Rose looked and saw an electrocrop being used I think that would be worth mentioning in the body.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:10, July 1, 2018 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:17, July 1, 2018 (UTC)
The CP
These may be formatting objections rather than substantial ones, but I'd like to see Mission to Canto Bight worked in somewhere.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:23, July 7, 2018 (UTC)
Change "increase in speed" to the more concise "speed up".- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:23, July 7, 2018 (UTC)
Is there room in the article for a pic of Hoth Stuff?- I'm really not a fan of images in the BTS or appearances of comprehensive articles so I'd say no. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:23, July 7, 2018 (UTC)
- Great job otherwise. Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 19:12, July 1, 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:23, July 7, 2018 (UTC)