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Electro-pulse
- Nominated by: UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:32, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: If only Valance had access to better tech.
(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Fan26 (Talk) 20:16, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:27, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 13:55, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Zed42 (talk) 19:12, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Objections handled via IRC. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:16, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Fan
Context needed for Chio Fan and Honnah."While he managed to place the device on his cape, he failed to activate it in time when Vader turned around and caught him off-guard." This sentence has three male pronouns in it—I think Valance's name can be substituted in once.Fan26 (Talk) 19:08, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Addressed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:12, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
I think the BtS should note that the pulse was first mentioned in issue 3.Fan26 (Talk) 19:30, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:56, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
Per the quote, I think the device's range could be specified to have to be contact-based for activation.Could you include a sentence for the visual appearance of the device? (color, shape, ring)—spookywillowwtalk 20:56, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:14, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Ben
Can some date range be added? The series occurs before the Empire ascendant and after Han Solo's time on Carida, where Valance first appears, which began in or after 13 BBY.Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:11, January 25, 2020 (UTC)- Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:17, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
After reading over Target Vader 3, it seems to imply that the the electro-pulse was a component of another weapon. When the team first lands on Heva, Chio asks Valance if he removed the electro-pulse while looking at a blaster rifle.Zed42 (talk) 08:41, January 25, 2020 (UTC)- They aren't very clear as to where it came from, we can't assume that rifle is the origin of the device, could've just been another weapon they were going to use. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:03, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Either way, I don't think we can say that Valance had Chio prepare one in advance. It'd probably be better to just say that Valance took an electro-pulse with him. Zed42 (talk) 09:22, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Fair enough. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:27, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Either way, I don't think we can say that Valance had Chio prepare one in advance. It'd probably be better to just say that Valance took an electro-pulse with him. Zed42 (talk) 09:22, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- They aren't very clear as to where it came from, we can't assume that rifle is the origin of the device, could've just been another weapon they were going to use. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:03, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
I think you can add "hand-held" to the size field of the infobox.Do you think it's fair to add Category:Electrical weaponry and Category:Personal weaponry? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:07, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Addressed, but not sure if "personal weaponry" is a suitable category. Valance has only used it once thus far. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:12, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:00, January 26, 2020 (UTC)