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EG-127
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:52, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This guy somehow out did its comrades and managed three different names!
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
- TK-462 (talk) 19:17, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 15:34, October 1, 2020 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 15:37, October 1, 2020 (UTC) - LordMominutiae (talk) 04:50, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn (Talk) 06:44, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
Object
TK
Hoth and Batuu need context.EG-30 needs context.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
Can "When the Galactic Empire attacked Echo Base in 3 ABY," all be referenced to the Atlas?Additionally, the way this is worded makes it sound like the attack was isolated, rather than noting that the attack was part of the overall Battle of Hoth.- Yes, Atlas isn't just a list of dates. The Empire attacking Echo Base is referring to the Battle of Hoth, that's what the entire battle is about. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
"When the Galactic Empire attacked Echo Base in 3 ABY, it was the first battle EG-127 had participated in and the droid tried to power as equipment as possible, as it believed the Alliance was depending on it." This sentence has some issues and could be broken up for clarity. Also, "tried to power as equipment as possible" is grammatically incorrect.- Split and added missing word. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
Second-class droid is infobox-exclusive.TK-462 (talk) 18:42, September 27, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:36, October 5, 2020 (UTC)