Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dynamic Synergetics Incorporated

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Dynamic Synergetics Incorporated

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 00:11, November 3, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another small article

(3 ECs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:04, November 9, 2015 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:58, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
3. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:54, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
4. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:31, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
5. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 02:39, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
6. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:32, December 16, 2015 (UTC)
7. Exiled Jedi (talk) 18:32, January 3, 2016 (UTC)

Object

• Maybe add a wee bit about the Intergalactic Banking Clan and its role in the galaxy? ProfessorTofty (talk) 00:20, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:43, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
    • Thanks, but it feels a bit weird to read now. So many short clauses, separated by commas. Could we maybe have it as two sentences, just so it flows a bit better? ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:36, November 11, 2015 (UTC)
      • Changed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:44, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• It feels kind of weird making this objection, but technically the fact that Nigel D. Findley is dead can't be sourced to the Planets of the Mist, unless it's included in some later reprint. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
  • Removed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 14:55, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

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