Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dusk in Kachirho (second nomination)

Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) ( talk ) 12:07, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: OMG That Japanese link!!!
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Dusk in Kachirho

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That's a lot of information in the opening paragraph to just be cited specifically to the painting item itself inside SWG the game. I believe you'll need separate sources to assert that the painting was available after the Battle of Yavin, that the battle was part of the Galactic Civil War, and that Kashyyyk is a planet. Dentface (talk) 17:31, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
- Oh good catch! all updated Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

~~Oy vey, that bts paragraph is humongous. Please split it up into two or three paragraphs.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:38, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
- Big Boy BTS has been cut down. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

~~Why can't the timeframe info be sourced straight to the opening crawl without the need for a note?~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:19, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- The opening crawl doesn't mention the battle of yavin. As such I was of the understanding it needed that short note to explain that the death star's destruction, mentioned in the crawl, occurred during that battle, per TEA? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:45, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
  - That's fine then. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:30, 1 November 2021 (UTC)