Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Duralium

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Duralium

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:41, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG, WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

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Support

1. Loqiical (talk) 00:31, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
2. Nice work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:58, 24 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Brahalium

• So an engineer shuts down a section of a factory because a duralium shard was bittle. Does the book provide any specifics into that? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:26, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Added more context. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:08, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• The quote says duralium-enforced steel but the body says duralium Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:45, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:31, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Better but it does need to specify that it is duralium-enforced. Duralium-steel as it is could be a few things (duralium coated steel, a duralium-steel alloy, etc) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 16:10, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
      • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:22, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
        • The body now says its an alloy, so is it an duralium-steel alloy or duralium-coated steel? This also needs to be consistent with the intro Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:47, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
          • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
• The quote also says that it is a panel, which sounds bigger than the piece/shard noted in the body? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:45, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:08, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
• Is there enough context in Rebel Rising to know why the panel is too brittle? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:45, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
• "every panel from that batch was pulled" , do we know what that means (eg pulled from the ship? storage?) do we have this context and is this the wording used by the source? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:26, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
  • The engineer says the following: 'We’ll have to halt production and pull every panel made from that batch.' AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:29, 21 June 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The Legends page shows that the subject appears in some capacity in Millennium Falcon, which predates TOR. Please check if this is indeed the case and document as necessary. If true, TOR would be the subject's first visual depiction in Legends. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:08, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
  • I had previously checked Millennium Falcon and there had been no appearance nor a mention. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:21, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Was a falsified appearance after all. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:19, 21 June 2022 (UTC)

Kiljiralium

• Could you mention Jaro Tapal when mentioning his lightsaber? Samonic 08:50, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• This page has exceeded the word limit, and this nomination will be withdrawn. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)