Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Drixni

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Drixni

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR (Talk) 05:27, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WP:Faithful Wookiee :P
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Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:41, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Remaining objections handled via Discord Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:42, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Nicely done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:09, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Panna Prime can also go in the infobox
  • Saying "was known" makes it sound like the store had a reputation, which I don't think is shown in the cartoon. I know Boba Fett has a line about knowing the remedy is in the city, but that doesn't mean the store was the only place where the serum was available. You could use that line as a quote though
  • You should include a description of the building itself. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:06, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All addressed! Regarding the quote, I don't think it's accurate for this article, since it refers more to the serum than to the shop. LucaRoR (Talk) 16:03, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
  • You can specify that the name of the store was written in the High Galactic alphabet. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:23, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I didn't even know of its existence, thanks, added. LucaRoR (Talk) 05:37, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Should mention that the name was written on the yellow awning as well. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:13, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The way it's written now it seems like there was only one sign. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:30, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  • A subheading isn't needed for the Tiny Death Star appearance, you can just use {{Nc}}
    • {{Nc}} done, regarding the first objections, is this better or what isn't clear? LucaRoR (Talk) 11:05, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Macaroni pointed out that you actually had the non-canon one correct by layout guide stipulations, so my bad. As for the sign now you're saying that the name of the store was written in three places, you're saying there's a blue and green sign, the one on the awning, and the one in the showcase, when I think you mean to say the first one was in the showcase. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:21, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Please correct the date per the source you're citing.
  • A higher-quality image can be obtained from Disney+. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:44, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Both addressed. LucaRoR (Talk) 06:55, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • You don't need a whole separate source that places the special itself in 1 ASW4 and then explain how that's 1 ABY, The Star Wars Holiday Special Cantina: Who's Who gives 1 ABY by itself. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:19, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Is this what you were looking for? LucaRoR (Talk) 19:23, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Please remove the full release date from the bts, just the year is needed.
  • Per Ristt and Kazan, the special does not need to be mentioned in the appearances section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:30, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The {{Store}} infobox should be used instead. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:47, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Is "serum" supposed to be capitalized as it currently is in the infobox?
  • I've found the Tiny Death Star info on the store, please incorporate what you think is necessary to the bts section.
  • Context for Luke and Han, please. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:40, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • The clerk should have their own article linked here. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:17, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The clerk has no dialogue, appears in half-frame (litteraly) and is totally ininfluent to the plot of the story. I belive he doesn't deserve an article, but if you want I can create it. LucaRoR (Talk) 13:33, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
      • All good, I had a think about it and rewatched the scene a few times. I think there's an argument either way but I'm more of an inclusionist than a deletionist so ok to leave it as-is. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've removed some no-sense information from the info-box. LucaRoR (Talk) 05:27, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:11, 3 September 2021 (UTC)