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Dreamwort

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I added missing links and content on my two copy-edits. Samonic 15:44, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:06, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:08, 22 July 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:10, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:52, 28 July 2022 (UTC)

I don't think the battle is really relevant to the Dreamwort, therefore, you can say: "the crash site housed the wreckage of a venator star destroyer that crashed there in the aftermath of a battle against a Separatist dreadnaught at Zeffo." Context for the location should be given in its first mention too.

~~I think the sentience of the plant needs to be specified.~~ Samonic 09:38, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
- Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 10:58, 16 July 2022 (UTC)

Mantis crew is missing italicisation.
- Adressed.
~~Is luxury yacht the best description for the Mantis given it's not being used as that by the Mantis crew?~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:29, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
- Although the ship is not being used for that purpose, the ship is still itself a luxury yacht and so I think it should be identified as such. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:37, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
  - Very well. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:05, 17 July 2022 (UTC)

"The seed Kestis had collected was planted in a terrarium owned by his companion Greez Dritus aboard the luxury yacht Stinger Mantis." -- you'll want to avoid the passive voice here by making the subject of the sentence whoever planted the seed rather than the seed itself as it currently is. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:57, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
- Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:26, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

You can describe the physical attributes of the plant in more detail, I'd mention that it consisted of a green stalk with multiple green leaves growing up the length of each stalk and the yellow flower at the top with a description of the petals. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:31, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
- Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:51, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

I am planning on getting a higher quality image that fits the infobox size, later today. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:32, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
- I have uploaded the new image. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:28, 16 July 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:52, 28 July 2022 (UTC)