Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dr'uun Unnh

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Dr'uun Unnh

• Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 22:30, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I didn't think I'd be revisiting The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book so soon, but this is the Canon counterpart of a character in that book. This is also my first Canon nom!
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(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 1 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

1. Dr'uun Unnh unnh da dada dada dunnn. Dr'uun Unnh unnh da da da dada dunnn. Three, six, nine damn she fine hopin she can sock it to me one mo time. Get low, Get low. Get low, Get low... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:20, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• You should probably specify Yavin 4 was a moon when you first mention it. Samonic 08:46, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Ah yes, that would flow better. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 05:30, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Location for Dantooine. Samonic ^(Talk) 09:59, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Located Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:36, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Context for Dantooine as well.
  • Oh yes. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:02, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• Legends counterpart missing from BTS.
  • Ah, the page has some conflicting info... I'm gonna need to research this. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:02, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
    • How's this coming along? The objection is long overdue. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:13, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Can't quite get there with my resources but was able to clarify SOME of it, hopefully that'll be easier for Jade to resolve in future :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:36, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
• Reviewing note: Added context for Rebel Files and reworked the BTS as per precedent, please apply this to future nominations. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:40, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Alright, noted. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:02, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please avoid the passive voice here: "Two primary landmasses were observed on the moon, Starloft and Wetyin" JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:10, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:44, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Apologies, realised that you can add a quote from IU "The Rebel Files". You can check Stalnus or Kikla for examples. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:15, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
  • In progress Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:44, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. Multiple objections well over 7 days old. Nominator had plenty of time to look into these. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:40, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:52, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:37, 13 October 2022 (UTC)