Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dhen-Moh genocides

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Dhen-Moh genocides

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. I made an edit but didn't see Luca had made the objection, so feel free to tweak if needed. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:08, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:30, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
3. Forgot to support this after reviewing, nice work! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:45, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
4. Liverpool92 06:17, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:09, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• "mentally compared the Dhen-Moh genocides […] in her mind during a conversation." There is some redundant wording here, but I didn't fix it myself because I'm not sure which you'd like to keep.
  • Seems Manoof has sorted that.
• Is the fact that Vader slaughtered children worth a mention in the body?
  • It's uncertain whether that's referring to the Dhen-Moh genocides.
• I'd like to see quote attribution expanded with to whom they are referring. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:54, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:20, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:09, 17 January 2022 (UTC)