Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Denta bean beverage

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Denta bean beverage

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 08:01, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's like coffee, but if you used baked beans instead of coffee beans. Gross.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

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Support

  1. ECvote Shockingly enough, this was my favorite story from the collection :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:20, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. —spookywillowwtalk 05:20, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ah, Dentface's signature drink OOM 224 23:04, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:04, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Small thing, but under the |description input in the infobox, could some of the beverage's traits be added? The article specifies smooth texture, and bitter flavor, which would fit a bit of precedent from some other food CAs to add there.—spookywillowwtalk 04:45, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Good idea. Added. :) Dentface (talk) 05:13, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • No need for a notoc since tocs will only be displayed if there are more than three subheadings
  • Also, only the planets themselves need to be mentioned in the infobox's |found= field
  • My copy-edit. To minimise the amount of references, I suggest pipelinking Baron Administrator to "administrator" so that it can be sourced to Absolutely Everything. Yes, the full title name will not longer be presented here, but isn't essential information to this article.
  • When referring to Dark Lords as "Sith Lords," the latter term should be pipelinked to Dark Lord of the Sith. However, again, to minimise the amount of references, I suggest changing "Sith Lord" to "the Imperial." Regardless of how the referencing works, I think establishing that he's an Imperial is more relevant than stating he's a Sith Lord in this context. OOM 224 11:04, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Planets & notoc: Fixed.
    • Sith > Imperial: Done.
    • I double-checked the source, and the short story itself refers to Lando as "Baron Administrator," so we're all set to leave that in. Dentface (talk) 20:15, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Excellent OOM 224 23:04, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:04, 17 August 2021 (UTC)