Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Darth Inexor

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Darth Inexor

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 17:59, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Bonkers Star Wars is best Star Wars.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:39, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:55, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:53, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 15:36, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 20:21, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Gender should go after species.
• The sectioning is confusing in my opinion, you start describing his physical appearance then you have a paragraph-break and you continue describing his physical appearance. Isn't there a better way to section it? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:50, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Gender: Done.
  • Yeah, the paragraph splitting is left over from other articles where I split physical appearance from worn clothing. Since that line blurs a bit with Inexor's design, I just merged the two paragraphs since they're rather short. Dentface (talk) 20:31, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• The archivedate doesn't seem to work, so I've switched the templates here to archiveurl. Also, I've standardised the Cite_web links. Please keep this in mind and apply this to the other articles whenever you've free to do so.
• The skin colour looks rather green to me, but I see where you're getting grey from. Something along the lines of "gray-green" would do here OOM 224 12:33, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Cite_web has been updated on all other Battle of the Sith Lords articles.
  • Skin color: Done. Dentface (talk) 19:29, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:21, 21 August 2021 (UTC)