Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Darkon III

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Darkon III

  • Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 17:00, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 13:38, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:53, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. 501
    • Awkward grammar alert - "This, in order for Linkaas to gain time to organize a trap on Dohu VII for the smuggler." Fix it please. "This was in order...." would fix it.
      • Corrected.
    • For future reference, quotation marks go after puctuation. Here, this - "Breaking Free", - should be this - "Breaking Free,". I've changed it here, but look out for in the future. 501st dogma(talk) 00:57, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
      • Oh, thanks for the heads-up. Winterz (talk) 01:29, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

  • There's something very awkward in that grammar, I just can't figure how to correct it. :/ Winterz (talk) 17:01, January 3, 2013 (UTC)