- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Dantooine/Canon
- Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 19:50, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My first try at this. All of the linked items are now created and after carefully reading, I believe it meets the other requirements.
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Code-8
- The article is already over 200 words, so it needs to be sectioned off, Per rule 14. Check out the Layout Guide to see what formatting to use. If it passes 250 words you will need to take this to the GAN page. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 05:28, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
Brandon
Per Commander Code-8 on sections. Presumably it should only need a History section.- Sources should be added to the BtS section.
You could also elaborate on the Legends part, such as names of prominent stories (like Knights of the Old Republic) that included and explored Dantooine. That may take it above 250 words.- Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:57, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
- Please expand the introduction, it should be considerably longer than that.
- All information in the introduction must be repeated in the main part of the article.
- Everything in the infobox needs to be mentioned in the main body of the article.
- How does A New Hope say that Humans are native to Dantooine or that it has a atmosphere breathable to Humans?
- The old databank is not a canon source and therefore should not be included in the sources section.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 02:27, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
- Alright, I believe I have taken care of the problems mentioned. Per Brandon's suggestion, I've gone ahead and added info on the Legends stories that seemed to be most prominent in featuring the planet. I'm not sure I see a need for anything more than that, after all, Legends is Legends, and if people want to read up on that, there is the tab up at the top that says "Legends." ProfessorTofty (talk) 20:48, July 24, 2014 (UTC)