Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dalnan bear

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Dalnan bear

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:20, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 21:20, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 108 words (0 introduction, 79 body, 29 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Lewisr (talk) 15:54, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:10, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 03:37, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
  4. BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 20:19, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  5. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:17, 30 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Amazingly
  • I think that you should reword your date note. You mention the Night of Sorrow in the reference but never explicitly name it in the article. I think it would be better if you said something like "Star Wars: Timelines dates the events of Cataclysm, including the attack from the Jedi, to 382 BBY." AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 20:56, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:19, 30 April 2023 (UTC)