Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dac ballet

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Dac ballet

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:45, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:THR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:35, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:21, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 19:27, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Dac's alternate name and Tempest Runner as a full cast recording don't seem relevant to this article.
  • Done — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 02:04, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
• Ballet company seems like a more appropriate description to use in the infobox, especially since dance troupe isn't specified in the body Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:29, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 01:49, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
• First two sentences can probably be merged, it doesn't look too great when the end of a sentence and the start of the next one use the same word. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:14, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 02:29, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Do we know which one it was? If so, that seems relavent, because otherwise the reader doesn't know if Tarpfen was a part of the ballet or not. "either the Mon Calamari Royal Guard or the Dac ballet". JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:46, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
  • No. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 04:16, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• The prose should document the quote. There's currently some quote-exclusive info OOM 224 16:18, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Handled via Discord OOM 224 19:27, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:27, 19 November 2021 (UTC)