Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crucitorn

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Crucitorn

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR (Talk) 15:46, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. My copy edit. Dentface (talk) 16:13, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. Good work :) -- YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 04:29, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 13:31, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 14:50, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:59, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Vergence
  • I'd specifically note that the pain endurance is a Force power.
  • Please provide context for the Flame-Wielders. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:13, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
    • There is no context for them, the only thing that I could write is “that fought against the Jedi during the Battle of Nar Shadda” but that would be redundant. LucaRoR (Talk) 05:31, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • "Jinn was twelve years old when he became apprentice to Dooku." There is nothing in the date note that supports this information currently. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:44, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. LucaRoR (Talk) 13:04, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
      • New issue: The date note does not establish a connection with the events described in the body. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:55, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The first Penguin link can be used to cite both release dates
  • It doesn't really make sense to say that Dooku cited a person as an example of pain endurance when it has more to do with that person's actions, so what you can say is that "Dooku cited Crucitorn's battle as an example" OOM 224 08:47, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:59, 18 August 2021 (UTC)