Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crown finch

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Crown finch

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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:16, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 03:30, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 09:28, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. Thought I struck and supported this already sorry! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:54, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:23, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Both "crown" and "finch" are OOU terms, so the bts note on spelling and the extra referencing seem unnecessary to me. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:24, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, truncated. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 16:48, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Please also mention the song sparrow somewhere here. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:05, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Added (another CAN-objective :P) LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 15:08, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Per Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Azurdactyl, you could put Coruscant in the infobox.
  • I would mention this in place of the Great Tree in the first sentence, and then mention the tree somewhere else. Also, I don't see why the colors and movements of the birds should be left out of the prose; they're currently quote-exclusive info very much relevant to the subject here. OOM 224 08:22, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
    • How is it now? LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 08:30, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
      • That's better OOM 224 09:28, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • First off, always worth a quick run through a word processor to catch spelling or basic grammar errors (I fixed brid -> bird). Only a couple issues, quote is currently unsourced Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Check the categories. For example, I can see birds is not a subcat of flying creatures so that needs to be added. Check Category: Creatures for others (Habitat? status? location? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Both done, thanks. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 12:36, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • It's worth noting that the script confirmed the spelling. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:31, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Done, thanks. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 19:49, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Currently, Great Tree is introduced with no context as to where it's located. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:07, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:23, 13 October 2021 (UTC)