Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crisped inferno weed

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Crisped inferno weed

Nominated by: Liverpool92 (talk) 19:00 21 December 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: This is my first time doing this so its kind of a learning experience.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Support: It's a good article, with in-depth knowledge, and no errors I can see. Harpsicorder (talk) 19:13, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

Hello and welcome to the CAN. Right off the bat, I must point out that the article does not comply with Rule 12, which states that an introduction should not be provided if the article body is under 165 words. Since the body of this article is only 153 words, it needs an overhaul to get rid of the introduction. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the feedback Shay. I have added a few more words which reach 165. Liverpool92 (talk) 00:21, 22 December (UTC)
  - The entire article is now above 250 words, the word limit for Comprehensive articles. There is still some stuff you can add such as context for some of the subjects in the article so it's unlikely the article can go below that word count. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:34, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
    - I have shortened it too 246 by condensing the info in the description and removing words that don’t relate to the food. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:51, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
      - I highly suggest you familiarize yourself with the nomination rules, as Rule 14 clearly states that an article should not be shortened like this to fall below the word limit. As I mentioned before, you can still provide some needed context for the subjects named in the article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:54, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        So it’s too long for a comprehensive status but not up to par for a good status? Liverpool92 (talk) 14:46 22 December 2020
        Yes. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:55, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        Ok then I will withdraw the nomination and add back the info. Liverpool92 (talk) 15:05 22 December 2020
        Only EduCorps members may take down nominations. I can do that for you. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:10, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        Ok thanks. Liverpool92 (talk) 15:18 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        After going through the article content, I think the first paragraph in History should be removed entirely, there's not a single mention of the weed in there. This will bring the word count of the body below 165 words, and thus the introduction will need to be removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:26, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        Ok I will remove it.Liverpool92 (talk) 15:35 22 December 2020
        Now you need to remove the sectioning (except for "Behind the scenes") and combine the info together. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:49, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        Done.Liverpool92 (talk) 16:03 22 December 2020
~~Current image is very low in quality, can you acquire a better one?~~
- I tried putting it into a photo enhancer but it caused all the colors of the image to enhance and changing the color of the food. If I zoom the image out it makes it harder to see. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:17 23 December 2020 (UTC)
  - Find someone who can get the image for you. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:23, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
    - Done.Liverpool92 (talk) 15:28 23 December 2020 (UTC)
~~Context for Tunga Arpagion.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:52, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
- Context added. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:15 23 December 2020 (UTC)
  - That's too much context. You only needed to describe Tunga (Species?). UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:23, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
    - Fixed. Liverpool92 (talk) 12:58 23 December 2020 (UTC)
I've just gotten access to the comic and it appears you can get a much, much sharper image. The current one is very low in quality, please have it replaced. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:51, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Immora

Was Arpagion or Hubi offered this and ate it? It says Arpagion was impersonating Hubi, but then says Hubi is the one who ate it. Immora (talk) 19:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
Although you have linked time, that article is about time as a measurable concept; in context, "last time" was "last "occasion", so I would suggest de-linking time as irrelevant. Immora (talk) 19:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

Context for Moncaladrome is needed. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 00:44, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

Unaddressed objections from Immora over 7 days old. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:56, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
Tommy-Macaroni 18:57, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, 28 January 2021 (UTC)