Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Crab glider

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Crab glider

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Might as well do a few of the other easy Atlas creatures
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Support

  1. I hope to not think about these horrors again! Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 15:23, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:06, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 15:22, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Objections handled via Discord OOM 224 14:46, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Immi Thrax

What the heck do not want

  • The sentence sentence either needs a commn between "upper atmosphere" and "it attracted" or needs to be restructured.
  • As with my air shrimps note, I don't think eye color can be concluded from the illustration, if that's what's being used for it. Similarly, the lighter patch isn't coming off as "brown" to me.
    • Changed the colors, how's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:46, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Air shrimps-style again, the descriptive info currently in the second paragraph would fit better in that first paragraph. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 09:48, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:46, 1 October 2021 (UTC)